Sunday, 1 April 2012

Martin and the Supermarket Animatic 2

So here's the 2nd Animatic. I think the part with the video game is a bit sudden, and it's strange how we go from there to the apple farm. I think I need to build up the perculiarness of the supermarket from martin's perspective a bit more slowly.


I also think Kath needs to keep talking through the apple aisle bit and talk to martin more... Maybe if we zoom into martin's face after scene 2, before the apple aisle scene.

Also South American music for the farm bits isn't really appropriate.

I need to find a way to make the farm scene look exciting and Brandi Strickland-y


To do list-

Sketch slidey doors opening and closing

Traces more supermarket scenes. Trace up and over down and around scene changes. 

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